Yes.
Score: 1
2. Does your character have more than one first/second name, for no apparent reason? +1
Yes.
Score: 2
3. [count all that apply]
She/he is half a human? +1
[half]An Angel? +1
[half]A Vampire? +1
[half]A Werewolf? +1
No.
4. She/He belongs to a royal family? +1
No.
5. Does she/he have amnesia? +1
It heals as the story goes on? +1
No.
Looks:
1. She/He has very long hair or hair with unusual colour? +1
Is She/He blonde? +1
I'd say that Violet hair is unusual. =w=
Score: 3
2. She/He has wings? +1
No.
3. She/he's not overweight, even though she doesn't watch her food intake/doesn't exercise. +1
He's not overwight, but he does go to the gym a lot, and is on a strict diet.
4. Her bra size is higher than B? +1
He's a guy... -_-
5. Does she/he belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.] +1
Sometimes he can be a Emo-ish.
Score: 4
6. Her eyes have a weird colour +1
is it red? +1
His eyes are yellow.
Score: 5
7. Do you describe her/his looks in the first chapter? +1.
Do you use words such as, "gorgeous," "mysterious," "stunning," "beautiful," "perfect," "awesome," "Amazing," when describing her/him? +1
I haven't even started my story that has him in yet.
1. She/He had a terrible past, +1
and She/He has angst about it +1.
No.
2. Is She/He an orphan? +1
No.
3. Was She/He physically abused? +1
Mentally abused? +1
Raped? +1
All the other characters know this? +1.
No, no, no and no again.
4. She/He saw a death of one of her/his family members +1
It was her/his fault +1
She/he only thinks it was her fault +1.
No, no and no.
Character
1. She/He has a very dark or very cheery character +1.
He's in between.
2. She/He has no enemies +1.
He has a lot of enemies in the ESSA.
3. She/He has no friends +1.
He has his friends that are also in his Spy Squad.
4. She/He has a "big point of view" [ex. "It's ok that my BF/GF left me, there are so many other boys/girls in the world"] +1.
Not really.
5. She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story +1.
Not really. He doesn't have many friends until quite a way into the story.
6. Everyone who dislikes her/him ends up humiliated, arrested or dead +1
Killed by her/him +1
Killed by her/his boy/girlfriend +1.
No, no and no.
7. She always understands others and gives the answer to any problems in their lives +1.
"I've got my own problems to worry about." -Athrun
8. She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1.
I guess you could call anti-socialism a hobby.
Score: 6
Romance
1. Your character seems to have more romance than all the other characters in the story +1
No.
2. Her/his boy/girlfriend is a canon character +1
A character from a canon couple +1
A character you would like to have as boyfriend+1
No, no and no.
3. She/he is bisexual +1
Definately not.
4. She/he had sex with a canon character +1
More than one canon character +1
A character you would like to have sex with +1
No, no and no.
Other
1.She/he is a musician +1
A rockstar +1
A dancer +1
A hacker +1.
He used to play guitar, but gave that up.
Score: 7
2. She's better than a canon character in some specific area he/she's good at [ex. better in taijutsu than rock lee, smarter than L, etc.] +1.
No.
3. She/he is not from a country the story is taking place +1
She/he somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1.
I'm not sure because I haven't started his story.
4. She/he doesn't have to pay for her/his actions/crimes/misitakes +1
Athrun tends to avoid fighting where he can, but not fighting back gets him injured.
5. Her/his enemies are complete opposites of her/him +1.
Sort of...
Score: 8
6. She/he looks like one of the canon characters/character from other anime +1.
Yes. (Inspired from Athrun Zala of Gundam SEED Destiny)
Score: 9
To the anti-sue traits!
2. Your character is a smoker. -1
No.
3. She/he has a disease that doesn't heal during the story. -1
No.
4. She/he is overweight [a little doesn`t count]. -1
No.
5. She/he is in love with a character who doesn't love her/him back. -1
No.
6. She/he is weak mentaly or physically. -1
No and no.
7. Since of her/his disese she/he is a little weak. -1
No.
She/He loves another OC. -1
She/He is not your OC. -1
Athrun hasn't met anyone he's fallen in love with so far.
Results!
0-5 Points-The Anti-Sue.
Your character is very far from being a Mary-Sue, so that's good. BUT, you should try to add a few more traits. If a character has a bit more things to make it sueish, it creates a good balance between anti and Mary-Sue.
5-15 Points-Original Character
Congratulations! You've created the perfect OC. Your character has a good blance of good and bad traits, and isn't over-powered or under-powered. Try to keep your OC in this category, and you've got yourself a nice, interesting character. Remember, an OC can make or break your story.
15-25 Points-Boarding-Sue
Not quite a Mary-Sue, but not quite the best an OC can be. This is the point where you need to think. Even the tiniest adjustment is going to tip the balance of your OC between good and bad. Try to add a few more weaknesses if your OC has hardly any.
25-35 Points-The Mary-Sue
Oh boy, here we go. If your OC falls into this category, you need to re-think the way you create your OCs. If you want to save your OC from Sue-dom, you need to take apart your character and analyse it for problems. There's always the oppurtunity to make it better, so don't give up until you've got a nice OC.
35+ Points-The Ultra-Sue
Good Lord...Hopefully, your character doesn't fall into this category. If it does, you've got a BIG problem on your hands. This is the 'oint Of No Return' for most OCs. If you want to save your character and bring it back to the real world, you're gonna have to strip it down to it's very core and remake it. There may be hope for your OC yet.
Total Points: 9
And Athrun isn't a Mary-Sue. Test 3 is a success!! ^^
Athrun: ...Yay...








I'm guessing you don't like Twilight?
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Naw, I don't think the books were well written and the movie was just poorly acted.
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Twilight sucks...If you're not down with that, I've got two words for ya...
Books were cheesy. The movie was godawful. I only stayed in the cinema out of respect for an accompanying friend, who likes the books for some odd reason. My eyes...they burned...
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The beacon of awesomeness that is my avatar was drawn by Bourne Rogue. Thanks, BR!
I'm DexDorugoramon in dA's Digimon Crew.
I'm the green Charizard in ~TheSSBBCrew
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Twilight sucks...If you're not down with that, I've got two words for ya...
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The beacon of awesomeness that is my avatar was drawn by Bourne Rogue. Thanks, BR!
I'm DexDorugoramon in dA's Digimon Crew.
I'm the green Charizard in ~TheSSBBCrew
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